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Obsidian Blackbird.'s avatar

Great stuff Carole ! Keep up the good work :)

Carole Eddington's avatar

Thank you, but please read the comment I put on here and then read my poem again.

Craig Marsden's avatar

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Carole Eddington's avatar

Craig, please read the comment I put on here and then read the poem again! Thanks!

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Carole Eddington's avatar

Craig, please read the comment I put on here and then read the poem again! Thanks!

Carole Eddington's avatar

Dear friends,

I have just corrected this poem. It's the first poem I ever posted on Substack. I was happy to see that it had spaces between the stanzas and didn't bunch the poem all together as happens on Facebook and other places. But I just noticed in horror, that it screwed up the lines and stanzas!!!!! OMG! My poem was all messed up! Well, I've now corrected it. PLEASE read it again as it's supposed to be!! Thank you, and I'll double check next time!

Love,

Carole

World Researcher's avatar

So true. To create is to have life. Artists are too valuable to squander!

And thank you for revising the poem so that the formatting worked. : )